Not a bad site. You have some spelling errors you need to fix and you should make sure the problem is clearly defined (not more than 50 grams etc). Put the problem before the results. The webpage should go in a chronological order--problem, forces, design, results, evaluation.

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Engineer's Welcome
Thanks for your cooperation. Please tell us of your thoughts on the design and what might help to improve the drop rate and stability of the cairage. What forces have we not considered in our planning stages? Anything obvious that would set us on the right track? It's up to you, every input counts.